| 17 ~~ amsev ~~ amsev@yahoo.com ~~ 2007-03-29 05:00:26 Love this story -- it is in my top ten of all time favorite SS/HG. Just wanted to send a short comment before I started to read it again for the umpteenth time. Hope to see more of your writing! |
| 16 ~~ delia ~~ allen426@yahoo.com ~~ 2006-11-21 17:29:20 the story should have been more aptly named 'ordinary-looking' people rather than 'ordinary people', because the lead-characters are not the least bit ordinay, in the normal sense, in fact it could be said that they might be too brilliant. But anyways, its a really good read. thanx for a most enjoyable experience. |
| 15 ~~ Jen ~~ JenMart01@aol.com ~~ 2006-10-02 12:36:56 Will you be writing a sequel?? What a fantastic piece of fanfiction! So intellegent and witty. I love how you captured the essence of everyone...though I have to say that it made me sad to see Dumbledore act the bad guy. It fit perfectly with your plot, however, and made me feel all the more for Hermione and Severus. Keep writing - you've got a wonderful talent! |
| 14 ~~ Ashe ~~ myrenatlie@hotmail.com ~~ 2006-08-31 16:08:07 Nutty brilliant story! I love how you've managed to keep both Hermione and Severus IC, yet introduce new things about them. You've also managed to make me want punjab Dumbledore. Then again.... I never really liked him. This version of him defiantly suits him better then the fluffy guy he's often portrayed as. I congratulate you on a work well written! -Ashe |
| 13 ~~ Aloe ~~ ~~ 2006-08-24 19:52:51 Wonderful story, and well worth a reread, Dumbledore is a bit of a prat, isn't he ... |
| 12 ~~ Shanastay ~~ Shanastay@aol.com ~~ 2006-05-04 07:51:54 I found a link for this fic within an unfinished fic on the Petulant Poetess site. Wonderful body of work. This is the second fic I've read that utterly made me hate Dumbledore, yet was in keeping with the characters. I had to laugh at some of the research references and advanced Physics notes as I am such a bookworm to actually understand all the terminology and such. Overall well done, well thought out, excellent writing. Enchanting. |
| 11 ~~ sbrande ~~ kabrax@dodo.com.au ~~ 2006-02-18 22:26:58 This is the fourth time I have read this wonderful story, and like all your work it is brilliantly written. This is by far my favourite of your work as I just love the highly intelligent Hermione and the thought provoking Severus. Anyway enough of my babble. Top job really. Cheers, Sonia |
| 10 ~~ Meghan ~~ Pruep3halliwell@aol.com ~~ 2006-01-11 01:14:17 the "this stuff is more... ubiquitous" line is not really right/what I think you meant to say. I assume you meant of indeterminable origin.. so use that word or dubious, ambiguous or equivocal. I love this story btw. this is like my third or 4th time reading it. |
| 9 ~~ Michelle Garcia ~~ flight_faerie88@juno.com ~~ 2005-12-18 05:43:21 Although I've never reviewed, I keep coming back to read this, because it's comforting and intellectual and casually, competently written. I love your poke at modern fic writers -- Sevvie's cute, but it doesn't suit a canon Snape, which isn't who you have but is still somewhat him. Thanks for writing a novel that makes people warm and fuzzy, and for not including silk sheets. |
| 8 ~~ HumanTales ~~ humantales@yahoo.com ~~ 2005-09-23 15:58:15 I just finished this story; it was an enjoyable read. My favorite of the three subplots was the research one; I have no trouble seeing these two in that state. I also liked the fact that you had Ron and Harry remain Hermione's friends, despite their dislike of Snape. |