| 19 ~~ hope ~~ hopeonceagain@yahoo.com ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-13 13:19:14 The scientist in me applauds you for ending this in the only way it could logically go. I love a 'happy ending' as much as anyone... but the science would not allow it in this case. At any rate, I'd read breakfast cereal adverts just on the recommendation that you were their author. Severus regret was palpable and I was really struck by the horror of all of Voldemort\'s strongest opponents just vanishing.... Very strong stuff. Makes me wonder if the time loop was truly coincidental or if it was something the Dark Lord engineered to destroy his opposition? Hmmmm.... ;- |
| 18 ~~ Scattered Logic ~~ scatteredlogic@gmail.com ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-13 11:37:24 I don't have to give the ending a second try - it's perfect the way it's written. I have enjoyed this story very much and have read it from beginning to end. It's easily become one of my favorite SSHG stories and I appreciate the time and care you took in crafting it. |
| 17 ~~ Midnight tiger ~~ starrschaos@yahoo.com ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-13 11:29:19 Thank you so much for posting this story. I've been hanging on every word and loving it. I think the ending was fitting and though I do hope you some day decide to write an epilogue with them sometime down the line. I also think that the change in your writing did help your char develpment in the situation a bit but am sorry for the way it came about. good luck to you and i am looking forward to reading more of your works. thanks again for posting. |
| 16 ~~ Novinha ~~ novinha@op.pl ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-13 09:28:34 I have but a minute, so I will just say that I loved the ending. It was perfect. And for me it was a very happy one, because it didn't feel rushed or anything like that. My only concern is the fact that this is the end of waiting for a Thursdays update... I do hope you will write more. Greetings from Poland, Novinha |
| 15 ~~ dragon_boots ~~ sabre_pumpkin@hotmail.com ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-13 03:17:16 I took a while to think of what to say for a review. I couldn't leave such a well written, well planned and emotive piece of writing without a response. I think this story would have to get one of the greatest compliments I can think of. This story is going to be thought of by me years from now. Thank you. |
| 14 ~~ Imhilien ~~ nicolel@iconz.co.nz ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-13 01:13:31 Well, after reading the last chapter I felt like reaching for the tissues. What a great writer you are (I feel I must say that! and I'm oddly reminded from the scene in 'Titanic' when you see the last moments of the ship on the surface, the people on board grimly and quietly waiting for the end as everything breaks apart around them. I daresay there is nothing left of Hogwarts but a terrible and silent emptiness... |
| 13 ~~ e ~~ fyiagcg@yahoo.com ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-12 22:51:38 you are somewhat evil. i thought that i had gone as crazy as hermione as i hit chapter 22 over and over again. i knew i had seen... well, eventually my sanity proved intact and 'coffee' replaced 'punch'. i hate to say anymore of what i think of chapter 22, because who likes it when someone gives away a secret?! you are an amazing writer, hayseed, and i look forward to reading everything you write in the future. and probably re-reading things you've written before! xoxo .e. |
| 12 ~~ Deeble ~~ deeblegirl@yahoo.com ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-12 21:50:16 You really couldn't have ended any other way -- assuming Things Working Out Well, at least. It stays true to the characters, and it's a very hopeful end; lemons just wouldn't have worked here, and I'm glad you resisted. An all-around excellent story. |
| 11 ~~ Nocturnus ~~ ~~ Chapter ~~ 2005-02-12 21:03:43 Just love it. Bravo. Thanks for this fic |
| 10 ~~ Maddy ~~ ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2005-02-12 19:36:15 While I was hoping for the happy ending that didn\'t happen, I can understand why you chose the ending you did [before I read the end notes]. It was a wonderful story, and I thoroughly enjoyed every chapter. |