84 ~~ Reece ~~ blackvenus@neomail.com ~~ Chapter ~~ 2008-03-13 05:55:03
Twenty-two chapters.
I read every one of them...
Here I am, wanting to write a glowing review, but finding that I can't bring myself to do it.
I recognize the fact that this story was brilliantly written -- but that doesn't change this feeling of dissatisfaction that I have after finishing it.
Like, looking forward to eating a ripe piece of fruit, only to discover that it's rotten as you bite into it.
I have no doubt that the author of this story has endless potential, and I look forward to reading other stories.
This story? Not so much. There's no redemption. No point. Even Stephen King gives a measure of hope after the horror. What else brings the people back?
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| 83 ~~ anonymous ~~ ~~ Chapter 22 ~~ 2008-03-07 14:42:19
It was well written, but i wish there was more exciting parts about the story. It didn't make me cry. I rather didn't like it, although I did read all of it.
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| 82 ~~ Carol Pentalentathon ~~ ~~ Chapter ~~ SS, you really made their relationship work. Lovely job!
Thank you for writing this fic. It was very moving, extraordinarily well-written, and even if I'm honestly not a fan of HG 2007-12-06 08:35:23 |
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