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Desperate Measures
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11 ~~ mcfan ~~ milliecy at gmail.com ~~ 2010-02-01 06:28:33
Beautiful writing. I\'ve enjoyed all your stories that are posted. Thank you very much for leaving this unfinished one up too.

10 ~~ Plumbum ~~ lyv@mailbox.hu ~~ 2009-01-04 15:23:31
A wonderful story, even unfinished as it is :- Thank you for leaving it posted. I was very glad to find it beore my exams. Really sweet. And I can imagine the end, because luckily you didn\'t leave us with any evil cliffies. Thanks again!

9 ~~ RenitalLeandra ~~ renitaleandra@yahoo.com ~~ 2008-01-21 15:56:10
(cont. from below when he received a letter from her. Maybe someday once he retires both he and Minerva will live close to one another and may continue their banter. And while the story may not be officially complete, I was still able to walk away at the end of the tale knowing that both Hermione and Severus had made certain decisions in the last chapter that could very well put them on the path of a happily ever after. That\'s what the romantic in me believes, anyway. ;

8 ~~ RenitalLeandra ~~ renitaleandra@yahoo.com ~~ 9 ~~ RenitalLeandra ~~ renitaleandra@yahoo.com ~~
Thank you so much for leaving this up on the internet. I spent all of yesterday reading it--even knowing that it had been abandoned--and I loved each and every WORD of the story. As a matter of fact, I read it TWICE because I loved it so much. Severus\'s inner turmoil over his son and his learning process of how to be a good father to Curt had me glued to the screen. And the moment when he told Hermione \"I don\'t give a damn\" when they were on their way to wake Poppy because of Curt\'s condition...*sniffs* And then there was that one paragraph when Severus realizes that Curt has claimed not only his \"mind\", but his heart as well. Wonderful. Hermione\'s strength of character was wonderful to see. It is not every author that gives Hermione a child while still maintaining the \"true\" Hermione. I enjoyed watching how she devised a way to give Curt the best home that she possibly could. I did feel for Albus when Minerva left Hogwarts, and then again
(cont. from below when he received a letter from her. Maybe someday once he retires both he and Minerva will live close to one another and may continue their banter. And while the story may not be officially complete, I was still able to walk away at the end of the tale knowing that both Hermione and Severus had made certain decisions in the last chapter that could very well put them on the path of a happily ever after. That\'s what the romantic in me believes, anyway. ;
7 ~~ Caterina ~~ redcatjewell@yahoo.com ~~ 2007-12-02 22:58:59
Hey, I just read your story and I loved it. The only thing it needs a few more chapters. Are you going to end the story? Please write back and let me know

6 ~~ Lone Madsen ~~ lonne2@mail.dk ~~ is superb! I Love it!
I was wondering how you where planning to end it? If you could give some gidelines for my brain, so it can finnish it, that would be nice... It will make me very happy! I simply can\'t get it out of my head! This is the best fanfik I\'ve seen so far. The style of writhing was
2006-10-18 02:09:32
5 ~~ Danielle ~~ daniellecorten@hotmail.com ~~ SS fanfic I\'ve read. Thank you for making this story
Well, Kalina, you know how I felt about it when I finished this story. I can say that I\'m verry curious about the end of the story, but kind of made my own happy end. This is a piece of art, and I\'m glad that you want to share it with us. Your writing style is lovely, like the eye for the smal things, like cloth they ware, how they feel about thing. This is realy the best HG
2006-04-06 09:24:33
4 ~~ Jace ~~ theraynesong@msn.com ~~ 2006-01-21 16:19:44
I was very dissapointed when I found out you were abandoning this story. I love this story very much. It\'s a beautiful work of art.

3 ~~ Janna ~~ bluebird_74656@hotmail.com ~~ 2005-11-25 00:03:58
I read this fic over four months ago and I still can\'t stop wondering about it. It\'s a pity that it\'s been abandoned, because it\'s an amazing story.

2 ~~ Laura ~~ Wolveria@aol.com ~~ Snape fanfics I\'ve ever read and it breaks my heart to see it unfinished, both from a author and reader\'s point of view. Consequently, its motivated me to get off my arse and continue writing my own stories for which I have cruelly abandoned. I think you\'ve put a lot of hard work into this story and I\'m very glad you decided to share it with the rest of us. Thank you.
I think this is one of the most interesting Hermione
2005-10-14 07:15:21
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