| 16 ~~ firefly124 ~~ ~~ 2007-02-23 07:48:13 I would write a long, thoughtful review ... if I could stop laughing long enough. This was priceless. |
| 15 ~~ alitheia7 ~~ alitheia777@yahoo.com ~~ 2006-01-21 15:41:57 When I found out that there is a part 2 to this story I had to rush over to read it! Please please let there be part 3 -the wedding and a younger Narcissa out looking for a husband. |
| 14 ~~ mwk ~~ ~~ 2005-09-04 20:13:53 wonderfully sarcastic tone. Kept snickering. Look forwards to your continued story. |
| 13 ~~ Severessa ~~ Severessa@yahoo.com ~~ 2005-08-28 22:22:28 Wonderful, Shiv! I love BOTH of these, One and Two. Thank you!!! |
| 12 ~~ queenp ~~ ~~ 2005-08-17 12:54:32 this was great...I love the way you portrayed Lucius...and the Lads' fun was well done...A most excellent story...I laughed almost as much as I did with BNDE (the original ..*giggle*. ..Thank you!! |
| 11 ~~ Tamar Amidon ~~ tamidon@gmail.com ~~ 2005-08-15 21:29:38 Gods, I love the lad culture approach you have to fanfic |
| 10 ~~ Rosmerta ~~ lschwaben@yahoo.com ~~ 2005-08-01 00:01:58 Shiv, this was priceless! A fitting followup to the first installment. I'd love some of that potion about now... ;D |
| 9 ~~ Kim ~~ kimilynn@yahoo.com ~~ 2005-07-31 18:01:36 What a great followup to BND!! Thoroughly enjoyed the story. I'd love to see the bachelor party and the wedding. |
| 8 ~~ Scattered Logic ~~ scatteredlogic@gmail.com ~~ 2005-07-31 00:02:43 "Miss Granger," Lucius replied. "Today never happened. If it had have happened, I would be obliged to hunt you down and make you suffer. As it didn't happen, that won't be necessary. If, however, I find out from other sources that this did happen, then there will be trouble the like of which will make the events of the previous five years fade into insignificance. Do we understand each other?" "Of course nothing like this would ever happen," she said. "But if it had, you could argue that it was a compliment in a way. After all, if you weren't a very dangerous and cunning man then it wouldn't be necessary for things like this to not happen to you." Those are, without a doubt, the two most brilliant and hilarious paragraphs ever written. ~applause~ I literally laughed until I had tears in my eyes. I didn't think that you could top BND, but you did. ; |
| 7 ~~ plaidpooka ~~ plaidpooka@yahoo.com ~~ 2005-07-30 15:40:45 Big fun, Shiv! I loved the first part of this, but I found that I loved the second part even more! Witty, clever, and it made me laugh right out loud. Your characterizations are so brilliant they make me giggle in glee. Thanks for reminding me what makes fanfic so much fun! : |