1 ~~ lau ~~ notmyrealemail@plop.com ~~ 2008-07-18 13:06:13
I have read lots of stories written by 'amateurs', please excuse the word, this has been the best so far. It was funny, sexy and interesting. It was also not strewn with awful grammar and spelling. What a really really good story.
| 1 ~~ MollysSister ~~ laura.dille@us.army.mil ~~ 2007-07-01 22:27:50
Many points to you for giving Hermione a novel career! I cannot remember reading another fic where she wasn’t a healer/researcher/li brarian/unspeakable. A vet is a common enough profession and I never would have put her together with it. Yes yes many points to you for being creative.
Even though the story was told through Hermione’s point of view I thought you did an excellent job of showing insight into Lucius mind. You gave Lucius a depth he doesn’t normally see in fic. Well not a depth of evilness, which is a nice change of pace. I liked the scene shocking the family lawyer. Would have enjoyed being a fly on the wall for that one! Thank you P!
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